I didn’t do my Last pitch but I presented it to friends and they told me I laughed too much while doing and looked away a lot so I tried to dim that down this time.
Aliana, I think you are off to a good start but it would probably be really beneficial if you wrote down your pitch like a script and memorized it. That way it would be smooth and succinct and you wouldn't have to struggle trying to think about what to say next. Also try not to fidget as much because it takes away from what you're saying. Other than that, great job!
Aliana,
ReplyDeleteI think you are off to a good start but it would probably be really beneficial if you wrote down your pitch like a script and memorized it. That way it would be smooth and succinct and you wouldn't have to struggle trying to think about what to say next. Also try not to fidget as much because it takes away from what you're saying. Other than that, great job!